turboshitnerd asked: Honestly, I just think the problem with that chapter is literally just the lack of dialogue tags. If you had done the script format again no one would've had a problem with it. Regardless of the effect you were "going for", purposefully obscuring who's talking is just not fun for the reader, who's going to struggle to at least some extent to figure out who's saying what. It's kind of like that shaky-cam BS in action movies. I get what you were going for, but I don't think it works.
Yeah, like I said I just didn’t think it would be that frustrating. This is probably just the result of hanging out with too many William Gaddis fans, TBH



