Incidentally, one thing that Floornight does sorely need is an editing pass, which I have been putting off for nearly a year, and have finally started working on

Mostly this will just be fixing simple grammatical errors, although there are one or two continuity mistakes I want to fix, along with touching up some of the more egregiously bad word choices (the redundancy of ”sibilant hiss” makes me cringe, and for some reason I waaaay overused the phrase “pretty much” in the early chapters)